You're right. It is very catchy. Sorry if it seemed rude the way I said that I didn't like the song. I just think it's a bit overrated. And I mean, it's not like I'm supposed to like every single song you use. I can't expect that from you either. :)
I like the singers that are singing. I have a feeling the group number with Lone and Freya is the show-down song.
No, i didn't find you rude at all :) Some songs i use myself, i don't like but if they fit the story and there's an underlying point, that helps. I know :) I didn't like a couple of songs you used in Arc 1 :P
Maybe...you wanna keep that feeling because you might not be right :)
Thanks for your comment :) The reason for Spencer to get the tapes was for her to play them at the sanitirium and try to help her mother because sometimes familiar things can bring them out of their comas :)
Oh okay, that makes sense now. I did remember reading something like that at the end now that I think of it. I kinda read the last scene quickly because it was already past my bedtime, lol. Thannks for the clarification.
Btw...there will be a Walker solo storyline ahead...there was one actually in the last episode but it was cut. It was about Walker re- auditioning for the club as they want to know, he's loyal...he would've performed an acoustic version of Just Dance. It was cut because too much was happening, i didn't think the storyline should've been that way and over- use of Lady Gaga :)
I understand there's not been too much male- action so far but there will be some scenes in the next ep, Ep 6, 8 and 9.
Also...when i was writing the treatment for The L-O-V-E Ballerina...Courtney and Spencer were going to have more scenes but i decided to let that happen in the next episode.
Episode 9 is a big Kitty and Mary Lou episode....i think it might shock you.
I might save Bloody Mary for the LG tribute in S2 :)
Oh okay. I'm kind of glad it got cut. I mean, yes, it would have been nice, but as you said it would have been too much stuff going on then. Also, I think it wouldn't have changed his character at all.
I can understand. Not many male storylines happen in my fic either really, they're harder to write for IMO.
Btw: I really liked the name change. I guess because of the previous title "Babydoll Forgotten" I guessed it was going to be a massive episode for Courtney I suppose.
Yay! Mary Lou is probably my second fave character, and Kitty is such a sweetie. :)
Okay. Yay! I shuffled my songs on my ipod and Bloody Mary was the first to come up, and for some reason now I just can't stop listening to it. I love almost all of LG's songs, she's a great singer and the songs are really catchy.
I know, i'm a male but i myself, find them hard to write...it's because they're pretty generic.
Thanks. Well, originally..it was going to be focused massively on Courtney but it was changed because obviously you and others didn't really like Spencer or understand her + she wasn't really in the first 3 eps much...so i wanted to tell her story which would've come up in the future had it not been done now.
Lol..I love Mary Lou. Plus, Dana's got a storyline coming up.
I've just gotta save some of her songs for the tribute because i love them so much, i use them. I love them, she's a good singer but not the best, she's more so a better entertainer...but she's amazing at acoustic.
I'm kind of glad it wasn't heavily featured on Courtney in a way because we still haven't heard much from some of the actual main characters yet and a lot of their storylines have only just begun, and I guess, for some reason, I prefer it when a new character is introduced that they don't get storylines in the very first episode, after that, it's alright, but the first episode is a bit much for me I guess. It's more when it takes spotlight away from another main character. I'm glad Spencer's story was mentioned now, I really liked it and Spencer's one of my fave characters now.
Mary Lou's so sweet and considerate. I love the songs she sings too. Cool, right now, Dana is kind of just a "no need to remember her" character, as in, she's pretty minor to the plot, but I'm sure soon she will get a great storyline and I'll change my mind about her.
Yeah, I've got heaps of LG songs in S2 of my fic, I'm using Bloody Mary then. There's also going to be a mash up competition in S2 and one of the mash-ups will be of two LG songs. I agree, her voice isn't that...how do I describe it... it isn't that excellent, as in how many notes she can sing, like her range or something (sorry, I don't know a lot of the musical singing terminology :P). But her songs are really catchy and you can never get them out of your head. And her costumes are just so strange but at the same time entertaining. :P
Yeah, they are...it's so weird, we're males and we can't write males. Tbh...for me, i prefer writing females because it's a challenge.
Yeah, me too...Plus, Courtney's only a recurring character so you wouldn't want her to be heavily focused on in like you say, her first episode. Courtney and Spencer will have a few good scenes in IDina..i wonder where they know each other from. Btw.....do you still like Walketh?
Soon....we'll learn a fair bit about Aurora and Beth's family. Plus, they'll have some scenes together in IDina.
Yeah, i love picking songs for her...she has one more solo in an upcoming episode...Ep 9 and Kitty also has a song with 2 other people...it's a mash- up. Episode 10 will be Sadie Hawkins dance. Yeah, Dana is like that...but with characters like her, Jess, Arrow and even CJ..i'm trying to weave them in gradually otherwise, they're force fed.
That's so amazing for me to hear...that you like Spencer because you hated her at the beginning.
Cool...i love a mash- up competition, i noticed you haven't done one this season. My fav songs of her's are...Americano, Schiebe, Bloody Mary, Beautiful.Dirty. Rich. I love her costumes :)
Sorry for late reply, been busy with my last two weeks of school, as well as writing for the Unitards.
Yeah I know, it is funny how we can't even write our own gender. I guess in a way everyone is different so I guess it kind of depends on who the character is and how they behave.
Firstly, yay, more Spencer/Courtney scenes, I really like their relationship at the moment, I'd maybe hope for some friendship in the future, but whatever happens really, they're stories are real interesting ATM. And as for Walketh, I like them and I'm not sick of them... just yet. I think maybe what Hinton said about them turning into Finchel maybe got to you. I wouldn't worry. I think at the start because they're new they're really exciting and fresh, but maybe soon they will become slightly old/boring. But I think all you have to do to keep them being fresh and new is to have breaks of their storyline every now and then so that people don't get bored of them. I've had to do that with Harmonerri in mine because they were heavily focused on at the beginning, and now they're less of a focus, and their finale in the last ep will be great closure for them, although there will be an even better closure in S2.
I really love family storylines. I think it's best to introduce a lot of the main character's parents as soon as you can because otherwise in later seasons they might not appear as people had expected, or maybe then you'd have too many to introduce later. But I mean... don't just introduce everyone's parents for the sake of it though unless they're adding to the story. But I'm sure seeing Beth/Aurora's family will be good. Can't wait.
YAY!! Another Mary Lou number, can't wait to see what her solo is. To be honest, I'm not really sure what the Sadie Hawkins is, I only ever heard of it since Glee's doing it soon in S4. In Australia we don't do a lot of the stuff they do in America, we have other things a lot of the time though. And yeah, i think it's a good idea to "weave them in to the story" so it doesn't seem forced, as that way we know who they are but we'll learn more soon.
I know. She's really growing on me now.
Yeah, there was going to be a mash up comp but I found duets a better idea since that way it introduced a lot of new storylines such as Amy/Jesse, Harmony/Winter friendship, Simon/Sugar, Spider/Laura. And I was going to do a mahs up comp later but I couldn't squish it in anywhere in S1, so it just had to wait for S2, lol. I do love LG songs, especially Bloody Mary, Electric Chapel, Judas, LoveGame and Americano. They're my main faves.
It's fine..how's the writing coming along? I'm so glad to hear Liz might be having a solo before the season is out, can't wait to see the song.
It is pretty hilarious actually.
You might get something in the next episode about that...but some things are going on right now in the season and it may seem like i've forgotten about some things but i haven't...everything's gonna come back. :) CJ is back in this episode briefly.
The comment Hinton made did get to me a little bit but i think it was more because it wasn't elaborated on...it was just blunt. Yeah, that's what..i'm doing with them..in this ep, there's a Walketh duet and Walker solo and in Ep 6, there's a small storyline between the two. Can't wait to see the Harmonerri closure.
This next episode, it's a TEAM episode.
I know..i'm not adding their parents just for the sake of it, there's a storyline brewing which will become pretty important.
CJ, Dana, Jess, Mary Lou, Arrow get little things in this episode.
She's one of my favourite characters to write now, she's just incredibly complex just like Devonne.
I remember you said something about a mash- up competition but i loved Duets, so i wouldn't of known any better..but i look forward to the mash-up's...Do you know what ep it will be? Like Ep6?
Are you still taking a break after the first season? :)
Btw..could you add the Ep4 song pages and edit info on them. PLEASE. I also promise to do more editing on your wiki, mostly when the season is over...then the edits can be sorted :)
It's coming good. I'm really motivated to write this episode for some reason. I think its whenever Crystal appears I love writing her because she has a lot of rude/hilarrious comments to make to others. Btw: I split the regionals ep into one ep, previously "Almost there" was ep 19 and "We're Here!" was ep 20, but now they're one, split into two halves. This was mostly so that I could fit in a christmas ep. And yeah, Liz is definitely getting one before the season ends. It's nothing major really, but in S2 she's included in heaps of songs. She has a duet in the first ep of S2.
I know, haha.
I really like CJ for some reason. He's just a different sort of character, and just the fact that he's like the school's photographer is already an interesting storyline and can start a lot.
I understand. He did kinda just say that, he did that with Harmonerri to me too, no explanation, but I guess I could understand his reasoning for Harmonerri being too overused, but I reckon Walketh isn't. The Harmonerri storyline is extremely dramatic. There's one episode especially where Harmony is really involved in the story and is REALLY upsets her what happens to Terri. Their story is really dramatic. I could talk for ages about it, but I just dont want to spoil anything too much. :P
Yay, I love team episodes. Ep 19's very much that kind of ep for the unitards actually right now :P
I know you wouldn't be doing that, I'm sure it's important.
Anything to do with Mary Lou and Arrow makes me happy. I like Arrow a lot too.
Yeah, Devonne is pretty complex. And ATM Mary Lou is kind of too. I absolutely still love her performance of Ugly.
You're one off. It's ep 5 in S2 the mash up comp will be. There's also another duet comp too as well. Theres also this thing I'm doing where it's like a whole episode of mini-stories including flashbacks from all of the main characters and we see their life in the past. I'm going to be releasing this during the hiatus. It doesn't really continue on, but i think its a good idea. Theres still songs. I'm still debating with myself whether it should be ep 1 of S2 or just an episode thats included in neither. :/
Yes, I am. But like I said, over those three months or so, I'm going to release that one chapter that I mentioned above. I'm planning to do HEAPS of editing on my wiki then and since its school holidays here in one week I'll be able to get that done then :D
Of course, I'd love to. I really loved ep 4 sooo much, and when I say that, I really mean it. The songs were amazing and literally I can't stop thinking about whether Celine will survive, and its so weird because we only really see her in one scene and she's only a fictional character O.O lol
Yeah..i'm gonna get writing Ep5 maybe tomorrow. :) It's wonderful when you're really motivated to write. I love Crystal though i'm not a fan of Ava :) Yeah, i knew about that already. *Dance* Can't wait for her song and S2 duet.
CJ will kinda be the enemy of Star Dominion.
Thanks. Wowzer, no i'm extremely excited for the storyline...i just can't wait to see how you deal with it.
I like Arrow a lot, there's just something about him but i love all my characters.
Yeah. That's true, Mary Lou is pretty complex, she's more than what meets the eye. I loved her duet with Kitty, when writing it..i actually didn't like how i did it at first until it was completed.
That sounds like such a cool idea, i think it should be it's own thing.
Yeah. I was just wondering, if you was still doing the break. I can't believe Season One of The Unitards is near the end and i only have 9 episodes left. *Sigh*
Thanks. Btw, the Ep 3 navigation got deleted because when i posted the episode originally, the navigation was close to the episode so all the colours of it, merged over the writing making it bearly unreadable. :) Thanks, it means a lot. I really loved Forgotten aswell, it was better than i expected :)
Yeah, it is weird but i feel her prescense is sorta felt through the whole episode even if you don't know of her fully yet. :)
Sorry for the late reply. Had some things to do. I love Crystal too, I loved Ariana Grande on Victorious. I'm not sure if you know because you may not be a big fan but there's a new show starting on Nickoledeon called "Sam and Cat" and it wil feature Sam Puckett from iCarly and Cat Valentine from Victorious, since both respective shows got cancelled due to their contracts. I really love writing Crystal and she'll reappear in Season Two, more in arcs 2 and 3 though. At first I loved the idea of Ava but I think that storyline with Laura kind of made me go a bit off her too. I think a lot of people hate her now, which in a way is good because now I can use her as like an enemy of the club. She's got a storyline in S2 that's quite big. Considering I'm not a fan of Ava myself I actually really like the story for her.
I kinda thought that CJ would be the enemy to Star Dominion for a while.
I like Arrow too, he kind of in a way reminds me of Rex but thats just 'cause they're the same portrayer. Logan Lerman for some reason seems to be a really popular portrayer for all glee fan fics for some peculiar reason, as is Josh Hutcherson. :\
I agree, Mary Lou is like that. I kinda get that feeling too, as if you've written something wrong, and it doesn't meet what you had planned, but when its completed you kinda think it worked out in the end. But a lot of the time I can't seem to be able to do it exactly as I see in my mind, but I usually get pretty close.
I know, me too, i still rememeber typing up the first blog for the fan fic for the first auditions. And I'm so excited for S2, i've done so much planning, I've even planned for S3 and there's a lot of Poppy stories for S3 now that I think of it. I'm really excited for your episodes too, btw, on the ep navigation I added the other pages with links already created and changed Babydoll Forgotten to the new title.
Thats right, you actually did say that to me a few days ago I think. I know what you mean, thats happened to me before on my wiki with mine. Thanks, there were a lot of scenes cut, as for most episodes. I think there were some things that I could have done better but I guess thats just the mindset of a writer who knows how everything's going to be planned out.
Yeah, thats what I thought. Maybe because of the intro scene where Spencer gets the tape and automatically you know who she is even though you havent met her. And then the scene with her dad where they talk, plus there's a small hint in the principals office where she says that an accident happened to her mother.
Btw: I'm sorry, i'll do the rest of the song pages tomorrow. Right now its my bed time and I'm really tired, plus I've got to get up early tomorrow for something. :P I hope thats alright :)
The late replay is alright, i was doing something anyway. I loved Ariana Grande on the first series of Victorious but in the second and third, she kinda acted the character kind irratingly. I know i've heard of it, i kinda can't wait because Sam is one of my fav characters of iCarly, it'll be fun how she works with Cat...though i'd rather have Sam and Jade together. Cool, i don't hate Ava..i just don't think she's the best character there. :) I love Ginger McCliff, Jessica Lange rules.
Yeah, i've noticed that aswell. Josh Hutcherson is a portrayer in loads of fics. :)
) Usually, i get everything how i see in my mind right.
I know, it's crazy but i bet when you finish a season, it's so fulfilling. I still can't believe i'm writing a Glee fan-fic as fanfics were never my thing but there so good. Yay, for Poppy stories, i love her :) Thanks for doing the navigation.
No. I thought you did Forgotten really - really well, it's definetley one of my favourites :)
Oh okay, sorry, this reply is even later :P Yeah, I think Ariana is a better singer than actress. I do like her song "Put Your Hearts Up", its quite good. I kind of found her annoying a bit in the last season too, and I think a lot of people found her that way. But I'm sure her being with Sam will maybe change her annoyingness, plus, since she's going to be one of the two main characters they may alter her slightly to be less annoying and more appealing to fans, since a lot of people have expressed negative comments about her from Victorious. I liked Sam, Carly & Freddie all equally to be honest. Ginger is going to have at least one scene in Almost There.
Yeah, its actually so weird, they must just be popular actors.
I get most things right, but sometimes I have more than one vision on how something should work, and so when I go to write it I can't choose what to do.
Poppy is having a big storyline in S3.
Thanks, I thought that The L-O-V-E Ballerina was really good too.
It's fine..i was asleep at the time (Time differences and all) Yeah, she's a better singer than actress, she just did something with her acting...like it wasn't like she was trying and she wasn't really funny. I hope so..i'll watch it if she's her S1 self .
I don't mind Freddie but when you say how he's changed...Season from season, it's kinda like WOW. I like Carly sometimes but sometimes, she's slightly irratating but Sam's..my fav :) Cool..loved her little scene. P.S. Claire and Demetria will be in this scene, there's lots of guest stars in this one.
Do you think you'll do Invitationals next season?
Yeah..Have you seen, they've started filming Catching Fire. Can't wait.
I understand..i sometimes have alternative things to do when i do but it just comes in the moment, i think.
Cool and thanks.
I think my Invitationals might be a good episode, it's kind of a taster for Sectionals. Plus, most of the songs listed on the 1x06, i'm not using...i'll now be using a complete new songlist but i'm not going to reveal it because i want it to be a surprise...so slushies can be done after the ep. :)
Haha, timezones these days, they're really annoying. I wish that all the times in the world were all the same sometimes, lol. And yeah, I hope she acts like her S1 self in Sam and Cat. I mean, I'm a fan of both Victorious and iCarly, but no where near as much as Glee, for example, I haven't seen every episode of both those shows, but for Glee I have.
Yeah, he has changed a lot Freddie. Both physically and as a character... I guess. Sometimes I can find Carly annoying, but there's only small moments. I guess I find all characters on all shows annoying sometimes, nobody's perfect after all. I find Sam the funniest and Freddie the least funniest, Carly's just in the middle. Spencer's alright too, sometimes I find his stories a bit repetitive sometiems though. And yay, I absolutely love Claire, she's so supportive of Devonne. And I can't wait to see how you follow up with Demetria's personality now.
I'm honestly not sure. I may somehow squeeze it in. I'm already so tight already so if I did do it it'd have to be fitted into an episode that's already planned, probably right near the start. It wouldn't be a massive thing because we obviously know they'd have to get past Invitationals, I don't think it's even possible to lose Invitationals, is it?
OMG, have they? I didn't know that. I've read all three books. I knew they were making a sequel but I didn't know they'd began filming already.
Yeah, i guess so.
Oh okay, I'll do them once the ep is aired. I've only got three days of school left. Tuesday we're doing some award day and then on Wednesday apparantly we have no classes, we're just doing fun activities all day, since its the last day of school this year. Then its my long 6 week holidays. :D *is so excited, this year has been so long, I need a break* :P
Btw: sorry, i'm doing the song pages soon, may be tomorrow if I can't get them done by tonight. Can u believe I still have an assignment due two days before the end of the year? I've been doing it all weekend, I'm almost done :D
I don't mind Timezones when i'm on holiday because we usually go to places where were behind so when my hometown is having night, we're having day. Btw, i'm going to Disneyworld, Florida in April (Day before my Birthday) for 2 weeks so obviously, my fic will be on hiatus then..but i'm sure, i'll come back and want to use loads and loads of disney songs. :)
Yeah. I'ven not seen all the iCarly's, i watched the show mostly when it was in it's first and second like Victorious. I love Glee to bits, even though sometimes it can be frustrating in more ways than one.
I find Sam to be the funniest, then Freddie, then Carly. Yeah, his stories are pretty repetitive.
You'll see in good time, i'm really excited to be writing these scenes.
If you've got everything planned, i don't see any point in fitting it in. In Invitationals, they have to perform good, to qualify. But you didn't do one in Season 1, so it's not so bad, if there isn't one here.
Yes, they have.
I'm so glad for you (About your three days left) When i wasn't home- schooled, at my former school...there were days where we didn't do any work, we just got to watch movies and stuff but usually, i never attended. If i wanna watch a movie, i'll watch it in the comfort of my own home :) But you'd be surprised how fast 6 weeks actually goes....more Unitards (*yay*)
Oh okay, I'm sure you will. I've got a lot of tributes planned for S2, one of them is a Disney one. Obviously June will suggest it, since she's obsessed with Disney. It'll actually work well, the episode will kinda be about dreams. And as for the hiatus... I probably won't mind. I'm sure I'll be busy in April anyway, lol.
Either have I. Btw: have you seen Swan Song? I watched it online a few hours ago because Australia won't be airing Dynamic Duets till some time next year, and since I hate watching Christmas eps ages AFTER Christmas, i decided i'd better catch up to the current eps. Thank god theres internet otherwise I would not be able to wait a few months until more Glee, lol.
I'm sure you are.
I might not include it then. ATM the ideas for season two are pretty much full all the way up to episode 12, thats how much I love planning. haha. :P
Lol, that sounds good, I wish my school was more like that sometimes. We've had such a busy year and thats considering this year was actually my first year at high school. All the kids have been put under so much pressure and some kids dont turn up at all because they hate school so much. Some others have left the school altogether. But I guess thats what happens when you go to one of the top schools of your state. And its a private Catholic school and they're really strict. And yeah, i'm sooo excited for my holidays. Btw: i've been doing a lot of writing for Almost There, hopes that it'll be released tomorrow.
Hahahaah, so June :) But don't become like Glee where they over- use them. Cool, i like the sound of it, i'm doing a Disney ep in late S2.
I have seen Swan Song and i liked it but on the other end, i was dissapointed. They made out that the Winter Showcase was a big thing and yet Rachel won (when it's rare for Freshman to be invited) but what bummed me most was the fact, we didn't see her win (It kinda made it seem more unimportant). I loved Tina, i still like...Kitty, Satanana and Quinn can act bitchy but when Tina does it, it's SO BAD.
Hahahaa..i love planning too. Will Sugar, Liz and Teddy be singing more?
That sounds like a lot..i hate strict schools. I hope so, i wants my read. :)
Yeah, those random question marks are really annoying. I know how to remove them on an article, you just go into source mode and remove it there, then it'll be gone. I don't get how they pop up randomly.?
Thanks Jordan for you're edit to the Season One page and thanks for your song suggestions, lots of them will definetley be used. You have such great taste in music. :)
Also : You know when you edit pages, can you put into the summary edit section , what you edited so i know. I'll promise to do the same when i edit your wiki. Sorry about other day, i was gonna edit "The Bright Lights" Unitards page like i usually do, but i couldn't as i was working on one of my ff scenes and just going to have dinner. :)
That's okay. I promise as soon as more episodes are released I'll start editing more, it's just that at the moment, since only a certain amount of characters have been showed so far, and the storyline's are always limited in the first episode, I'm still getting to know the characters etc. And thanks, sorry, if I submitted too many. :/
Oh ok, sorry about that. I didn't know you wanted them, but I'll do them from now on. And on my wiki, it is preferred you add an edit summary, but if you don't want to, that's okay. Those summaries are helpful though. Btw I don't know if you know this or not, but if you click the arrow on the right side of edit at the top when you want to edit, a drop-down menu appears, and when you click on History, you can compare edits and see changes made.
That's okay that you didn't edit TBL page, I've gone ahead and done it now. Put your ff first, before mine, as you're the one writing your fic. Without you writing the fic, it'll never progress, with my wiki, I can do everything myself, and there are a few other users around to help around.
Thanks. Should be out in about one and a half weeks or so, maybe less, depending. :)
It's fine. I know and understand were you're coming from, you're edits are good so far so it's no problem. No don't apologize, i love that you submitted many :)
I didn't originially but i just find it helps the wiki more if you know what's been edited and what hasn't. Yeah, i do mean to add an edit summary but sometimes, i just forget. Oh really, that's quite helpful.
Cool. I noticed on your Season One page, you missed June and Harmony's duet on the songs on the TBL section, so i edited and added it lastnight. I will sure to do that, i mostly edit on yours's and other wikis when i've got free time and i'm not writing my fan-fic. :) True.
Oooh, i can't wait. :) "Part Two" is semi- completed, only a few more scenes done but originally i was gonna write some of the following episodes so everyone gets a package of new episodes.... but i don't know if i can restrain myself from posting because i love the feeling of getting feedback from readers, you know?.
Episode 4 and 5 are episodes to look out for. They're gonna be really good. :)
Also when more episodes have posted. Can you say what you're favourite episodes are as i'd like to know every users favs. :)
Yeah. I was just scrolling on the page and i thought one was missing and indeed, one was.
Yeah.. i think i'm just gonna post "Part Two" because my sister and her toddler are coming from Germany, so my writing will be very limited due to them coming. And i won't be able to write for Episode 2 yet. I think you did quite well with posting the first 3 episodes at the start. They were quite together. :)
Yeah. It's a bit hard for me, as i like most of your eps.
Okay then. I should probably be getting to sleep now. It's 10: 39 night time here. I usually go to bed around 9-ish (well thats when my parents want me to go to bed), but then stay up till about now-ish (10-ish to 10:30-ish).
But see you tomorrow. Hope you had a nice dinner, and have a good sleep for later ;)
I've put you as an Admin but if you don't want to, you don't have to be one. Don't add any pages like Characters or songs yet as i obviously want to start posting first before any of that. Thanks but if there's any editing errors on the Season One page feel free to edit.
And i'd like to personally say Welcome to this wiki. Yeah, finally got my own wiki.